Tuesday, June 16, 2009

The Land of Water

The ocean aspires against all odds. The sea is mysterious, and all the more dangerous. The more we find out, the more we are wrong, for this is a beast which can not be tamed. It throws itself around, but is not harmed. It holds onto what it claims, from birds too plane. Land has no power, when water strikes, for it has the deadliest bite. The ocean claim, anything at all, so when will it be your beach’s fall? The sea is stronger than anything alive, and yet we it like we are starving. We are animals, are we not, we’re the same as chimps, so why this priority for us, so why take from the sea, when we have such a bounty. This is who I am, you can't change me, this is I will forever be.

1 comment:

  1. Great work, I really enjoyed reading your story. Have you thought about using paragraphs to separate your ideas.
    :-)

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